tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post2595475874263281523..comments2023-08-29T07:22:38.871-05:00Comments on Cerebral Lunchbox: Second Crusader Challenge: Goldfish flash fictionWitless Expositionhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07455282931743006892noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-57193239331514503922011-03-30T09:12:40.673-05:002011-03-30T09:12:40.673-05:00Great job portraying character is so few words! I ...Great job portraying character is so few words! I love the image at the end.Holly Vancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10113438267020711966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-82180792826413702092011-03-26T18:01:44.307-05:002011-03-26T18:01:44.307-05:00Love all the abilities these guys seem to have. I&...Love all the abilities these guys seem to have. I'm glad the goldfish wasn't hurt :-)Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-17591604207619636602011-03-26T11:50:40.885-05:002011-03-26T11:50:40.885-05:00Nice! Thanks for sharing.Nice! Thanks for sharing.Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-29310992824134096392011-03-25T20:29:21.984-05:002011-03-25T20:29:21.984-05:00I really liked this. Great job. Cool that you used...I really liked this. Great job. Cool that you used your characters.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-55726040480916305032011-03-25T17:41:34.744-05:002011-03-25T17:41:34.744-05:00If those characters are from your WIP it sounds ac...If those characters are from your WIP it sounds ace. Nice job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-28839174684045270152011-03-25T05:13:25.283-05:002011-03-25T05:13:25.283-05:00Nice! If it's a glimpse into the characters in...Nice! If it's a glimpse into the characters in your wip, then I'm looking forward to reading it when it's published :-)Tony Bensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06798586432645889182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-86794339285574505362011-03-24T14:53:11.473-05:002011-03-24T14:53:11.473-05:00Interesting piece!Interesting piece!Alison Pearce Stevenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955543150406880055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-64876432381813291042011-03-24T12:54:18.452-05:002011-03-24T12:54:18.452-05:00I love, "Let me show you how it's done! V...I love, "Let me show you how it's done! Voila!" and you did. Great job.jkraus8464https://www.blogger.com/profile/15138306757339514666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-12709074156692577692011-03-24T11:23:36.820-05:002011-03-24T11:23:36.820-05:00Force fields and flames! You gotta like that mixtu...Force fields and flames! You gotta like that mixture! Good job!Mary Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09429769115085903305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-3743270237145624492011-03-24T05:39:54.680-05:002011-03-24T05:39:54.680-05:00always love stories incorporating magic!always love stories incorporating magic!Sylviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05519691494230856599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-35276216171311856052011-03-23T22:13:32.236-05:002011-03-23T22:13:32.236-05:00I love all the magic you've incorporated! Nice...I love all the magic you've incorporated! Nice entry.Kari Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04404956407734167300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-35363917544275808012011-03-23T14:03:58.053-05:002011-03-23T14:03:58.053-05:00Lots of great magic going on here! I'm impress...Lots of great magic going on here! I'm impressed when people can create a whole new world in just a few words.Sierra Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16364930724666386832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-34749577953561893012011-03-23T13:25:17.681-05:002011-03-23T13:25:17.681-05:00great last sentence - liked thisgreat last sentence - liked thisalberta rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02132420168908365099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-62836644054029341132011-03-23T13:25:02.627-05:002011-03-23T13:25:02.627-05:00Fun, fantastical piece! Well done :))Fun, fantastical piece! Well done :))Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01899768909313326172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-65242614321661954032011-03-23T11:36:12.136-05:002011-03-23T11:36:12.136-05:00Flashy. Nice demonstration of "power".Flashy. Nice demonstration of "power".Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-59268615441516714842011-03-23T00:58:10.665-05:002011-03-23T00:58:10.665-05:00Oooh! Magic! Cool☺ Love the name Clara and I like ...Oooh! Magic! Cool☺ Love the name Clara and I like that she is the one with the power. Awesome.Amanda Milnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07582468814920761586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-6538670055795875692011-03-22T19:15:09.156-05:002011-03-22T19:15:09.156-05:00Beautiful! Love the touch of magic. :)Beautiful! Love the touch of magic. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-80946397221509158922011-03-22T05:32:27.857-05:002011-03-22T05:32:27.857-05:00Woot! Girl power. :-)Woot! Girl power. :-)Cally Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08313803959936813426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-83709489911204346342011-03-21T22:16:36.188-05:002011-03-21T22:16:36.188-05:00Love it! I want to know what else she can do :)Love it! I want to know what else she can do :)Trishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-90916627502495688552011-03-21T20:21:29.833-05:002011-03-21T20:21:29.833-05:00Sounds like there are various gifts involved. Inte...Sounds like there are various gifts involved. Interesting characters. I'd like to know more.Ben Langhinrichshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16077213274836551992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-56464071658061139522011-03-21T17:21:34.824-05:002011-03-21T17:21:34.824-05:00That's intriguing. Lots of nice magic going on...That's intriguing. Lots of nice magic going on. :) Good job. Great that you were able to springboard from your WiP, too.Carol Riggshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14092209912983783974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-6024644302562272372011-03-21T16:34:20.595-05:002011-03-21T16:34:20.595-05:00Very intriguing characters. I'd read more...Very intriguing characters. I'd read more...Vicki Tremperhttp://www.vbtremper.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-51448153835070783052011-03-21T16:30:34.647-05:002011-03-21T16:30:34.647-05:00Wow! great little piece and awesome last sentence....Wow! great little piece and awesome last sentence.Margo Bensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06759845391358543223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-34423674993152720812011-03-21T15:35:15.738-05:002011-03-21T15:35:15.738-05:00Very nice! I like that last sentence a lot.Very nice! I like that last sentence a lot.amber d*https://www.blogger.com/profile/12780493047694247556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3951016553704108326.post-81876616331368973452011-03-21T15:03:23.434-05:002011-03-21T15:03:23.434-05:00Nice work!Nice work!the Tsaritsahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00679262620541078819noreply@blogger.com