Not much of a story, this is really more of a glimpse at the characters in my current WIP, A Window to the Gift. Hope you guys enjoy!
"Clara's Challenge"
The goldfish bowl teetered slowly from the edge of the blade. Vincent scowled at the giggles he heard from the girls in the corner. Smoke wafted Katherine’s cigarette. His nose twitched.
“A-chooo!” He saw the bowl fall.
Flicking her wrist, Katherine caught it with her force-field. It floated in the air for a moment, before flying across the room and coming to rest on the kitchen table.
He felt Clara’s arms around him, with a kiss she said, “Let me show you how it’s done.”
She snapped her fingers and he watched the flames dance across her hand.
27 comments:
Very cool flash piece. :)
Ooh...I like this one!
Nikki
Nice work!
Very nice! I like that last sentence a lot.
Wow! great little piece and awesome last sentence.
Very intriguing characters. I'd read more...
That's intriguing. Lots of nice magic going on. :) Good job. Great that you were able to springboard from your WiP, too.
Sounds like there are various gifts involved. Interesting characters. I'd like to know more.
Love it! I want to know what else she can do :)
Woot! Girl power. :-)
Beautiful! Love the touch of magic. :)
Oooh! Magic! Cool☺ Love the name Clara and I like that she is the one with the power. Awesome.
Flashy. Nice demonstration of "power".
Fun, fantastical piece! Well done :))
great last sentence - liked this
Lots of great magic going on here! I'm impressed when people can create a whole new world in just a few words.
I love all the magic you've incorporated! Nice entry.
always love stories incorporating magic!
Force fields and flames! You gotta like that mixture! Good job!
I love, "Let me show you how it's done! Voila!" and you did. Great job.
Interesting piece!
Nice! If it's a glimpse into the characters in your wip, then I'm looking forward to reading it when it's published :-)
If those characters are from your WIP it sounds ace. Nice job!
I really liked this. Great job. Cool that you used your characters.
Nice! Thanks for sharing.
Love all the abilities these guys seem to have. I'm glad the goldfish wasn't hurt :-)
Great job portraying character is so few words! I love the image at the end.
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