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Sunday, October 16, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday--Taking Liberty

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I'm getting close to the end of my serial story Taking Liberty. It's a story that I've been writing weekly (mostly, with some gaps) based on words provided by Three Word Wednesday.

It's the story of Elizabeth and Liberty: two classmates who after Liberty dies, find themselves in a battle over possession for Elizabeth's body.

This passage comes from later in the story, when Liberty starts showing more control over the situation.

Every muscle in my body turned to rigid steel.  My back slowly started arching; my bones audibly creaking. Everything around me went silent and black.
"Do you see what I can do to you?  Do you really want to fight me on this?" Liberty growled inside my skull.
So what do you think?  Intriguing enough to keep you reading?  If you've enjoyed this, please come back for future episodes of Taking Liberty.


Monica Enderle Pierce said...

Quite the struggle for some very high stakes. I like this idea!

Karysa Faire said...

Wow. That's intense. These girls were friends before Liberty died?

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